Another little update and some expected dissatisfaction

I'm...not totally happy with a lot of stuff in this at this point. I had to do a little editing of my lineart because the head was...really too big. I think it's better now, but I still definitely lost the softness I wanted in this. And the clothes don't please me. They aren't really...meshing with my original mental image. I don't know. I might change a couple of things yet. I fought with the face for a while last night and actually DID change a few things -- finally got the nose looking better, I think, which is nice...but overall, my lineart feels to...heavy. Which is a perennial problem of mine. But I might lock the transparency and change the lineart to slightly lighter colors. Maybe. We'll see. 

Anyway, WIP 3: